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shocfix ([info]shocfix) wrote,
@ 2005-02-01 18:00:00

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Godric's Hollow - Epilogue : Nanny- H/R - PG
Title : Nanny
Pairing : Harry/Ron
Prompt : nanny
Words : 650
Rating : PG
Note : A peek into the lives of my Godric’s Hollow!Harry and Ron, which I have been promising for exactly a year, tomorrow!


We’d been living together for four years, and I thought we couldn’t be happier.

I’m not saying that everything was perfect.

I moved out of the house, and in with Harry.

Hermione was so supportive, and I’m sure she was pleased to get me out from under her feet, so she could fill the house with the famililess house-elves she was trying to rehome.

Teddy and Alex weren’t surprised, but they’d been used to her dad seeing men.

Di and Philip were fine; I think it helped that they only ever saw their dad in Muggle London, anyway, so it didn’t directly affect them.

My girls were wonderful; I suspect Lizzie got to them before I sat them down and stumbled through my explanation, because they all smiled and hugged me, and there is no way I’d got my point across all that clearly.

Lizzie gave me such a hug, and promised to bring the children to see us every week.

Yes, children; little Arthur had a baby sister; and at least we knew who her father was.

And there wasn’t anyone else that Harry needed to tell.

My brothers’ reactions varied; I could tell that Bill was shocked, but Fleur was so magnificently unshocked that the air was taken right out of his sails; Charlie didn’t bat an eyelid, I guess he spends so much time with animals, that all humans are the same and equally shaggable; Percy was not impressed and I could see him worrying about how it would affect him at work, and I could have punched him; the twins’ eyes sparkled and they looked younger and more mischievous than I’d seen them in years, and I knew we were in for a stream of rude comments and dreadful tricks, but I wouldn’t have it any other way.

We didn’t tell anyone else.

A change of address form at work, specifying Harry as my emergency contact went unremarked on.

I Apparated to work and no one knew or cared who I Apparated home to.

So, we were officially together; at last.

It had been a long time since we’d lived together, and it took some getting used to.

Harry was used to being in charge of his own space, but, luckily, I was used to Hermione being in charge of mine, and I had no strong opinions on décor or which day to do laundry.

I had very strong opinions on having utterly filthy sex, but, luckily, Harry agreed with me.

And, OK, the sex wasn’t as acrobatic as it once was.

And the days of four times a night were long gone.

But it was unhurried because we weren’t in a hurry.

And it was as often as we wanted, not as often as we managed to sneak in.

And we woke up together every morning.

And we saw Hermione and the children and the grandchildren, regularly.

Twelve grandchildren, between us, amazingly enough.

Harry loved mine as much as he loved Diana’s, and her boys were the image of their grandfather, and had a very special place in my heart.

And I thought we couldn’t be happier.

I thought there was nothing that could make me happier than being with Harry.

I never thought I’d see anyone make him happier than I could.

Until Teddy came out of his and Alex’s bedroom and handed Harry a warmly wrapped bundle with a tuft of red hair peeping out above green eyes.

And I put my arms around them and looked at the beautiful grumpy face of our grandchild.

“What have you called him?” Hermione asked, stroking the red hair with a fingertip.

“We thought Ronald; Ronnie,” Teddy said. “None of the girls have used it.”

“Oh, Ted,” I said. “That’s… thank you.”

“Welcome, Ronnie,” Hermione whispered. “I’m your Gran; and these two are your Grandpa and your Nanny, you’ll have to work out which is which.”


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[info]skree_ratling
2007-09-29 12:18 am UTC (link)
Oh wow. Brokeback Mountain broke my heart, I'm so, so glad our boys get a happy ending here. :)

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(Anonymous)
2007-10-23 07:18 am UTC (link)
It is a rare talent to let a reader experience all sorts of emotions, being sad and desperate as well as happy and touched; but it's even more exceptional to do so when the pairing isn't what a reader would origially read.

Like I already told you, I'm a hard, hard, hard-core Harry/Draco shipper, and they will always stay my One True Pairing, followed by Ron/Hermione next. Your story however made me totally forget about that fact because it was so lovely, so amazingly written and so exceptional that it absolutely didn't matter who those two people loving each other were.

At first I thought the sex scenes would irk me out a little, but they didn't, they just felt right and wonderful, and despite being explicit only supported the plot, showing how much Harry and Ron loved and craved each other - so much that every passing year with them not being able to be together was torture for me.

I did feel bad for Hermione (for Ginny as long as she was alive as well), and I also loved how you portrayed those two characters. Slash writers often tend to put the wives in a bad light, and mostly Ginny often comes over as such a horrible bitch that it ruins the whole fanfic for me. You did everything right, though.

I also loved the children, especially Lizzy, although the cousins getting together was a bit of a shock, but I guess with the history of pureblood marriages the wizarding world has nobody really minds first cousins getting married.

I could probably add a 100 more things that i loved about your fic, but most of all I was impressed by your writing style and how you made this story so touching and vivid throughout all the 17 chapters plus the epilogue. As I said, I'll rec this and try to convince some H/D shippers to give this a try, because it's exceptionally brilliant! :)

Oh, and I was really really glad to find out that this didn't end as badly as BBM, quite the opposite, thank Merlin ^^

Leandra

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[info]shocfix
2007-10-23 08:53 am UTC (link)
This is the most wonderful review I have EVER got!

to sweep you along when it isn''t your ship means the WORLD to me. Ron/Hermione is really my OTP, so I would never, ever hurt her - more than is necessary...

I was surprised when people were shocked at the cousin marriage - in the UK people marry first cousins - Queen Victoria and Prince Albert were first cousins!

You should have seen how people were BEGGING me not to kill Harry as it got closer to the end - I have never been so evil - as if I would!

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!

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[info]mrsquizzical
2007-10-23 11:52 am UTC (link)
SUCH a satisfying end to this one.

but even though i know the ending the journey breaks me up into tiny little pieces every time.

this is such an achievement, shocolate.

*snuggles them all - harry, ron, hermione, ginny's ghost, the children, the grandchildren and you - in a huge smooshy hug*

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[info]shocfix
2007-10-23 12:25 pm UTC (link)
I really am terribly proud of it - and I love you to little tiny pieces!

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[info]ladydeth12
2008-02-05 02:45 am UTC (link)
i just came across this wonderful fic... and omg, all the times that i just wanted to bawl my eyes out! you created such a beautiful story between harry and ron that just tears at all the emotions. i'm generally not a h/r shipper (more h/d) but once i started reading, i just couldn't stop :)

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[info]shocfix
2008-02-05 11:39 am UTC (link)
thank you so, so much.

this fic is my baby - you should have seen what it did to muy slist as I posted it drabble by drabble and kept killing people!

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(Anonymous)
2008-02-14 07:38 am UTC (link)
I've been reading H/R for a LONG time, and was aware of this fic for nearly that same amount of time, but I was so afraid to read it. I was so scared that Harry and Ron would have the same heartbreaking ending as Jack and Ennis, and I just couldn't handle it. I hate reading sad stories, or watching sad movies, or even listening to sad music--there's enough sadness in real life that we shouldn't have to find entertainment in it, in my humble opinion. But I happened upon it through a recs list, and decided to give it a go; I could always bail out if it got too harsh... but I'm so glad I didn't. What a beautiful story. I loved every letter of it, and I hope that makes up for my original reluctance to read it. ;)

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[info]shocfix
2008-02-14 07:47 am UTC (link)
oh, thank you, thank you!

It is very much my baby - you should have seen my tormenting my flist with it, because I wrote it in teh weeks befofre BBM came out in the US cinemas, and everyone was all 'don't kill him!' and I was all 'I haven't decided yet' - which was a total lie!!

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(Anonymous)
2008-02-22 07:01 pm UTC (link)
Wow. Thanks for that, it was amazing. The sparse writing style worked perfectly. You did Ron's voice spot on. Happy. Sad. Life. Death. Birth. Re-birth. Perhaps my favorite line was where Ron turned fifty and wondered:

Fifty!

Shit.

We had a big family thing, with all the brothers and all the cousins and I was left with the feeling that I really should decide what to do with my life any year now.

Classic! Thanks again, Chuffed4Angst

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[info]ex_ronald_we733
2008-02-29 05:50 am UTC (link)
I thought I was getting a sad ending!

So happy. *VBG*

Nanny and Grandpa. Nice one.

Loved this so much.

I'm going to be so tired at work tomorrow today.

*happytiredsigh*

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[info]shocfix
2008-02-29 07:27 am UTC (link)
OMG - you inHALED this!

Thank you so much - it is my baby, yes, *nods*

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[info]star98hope
2008-03-12 03:12 am UTC (link)
Oh, my.

*sniff*

I am so, so glad I finally read this. I enjoy all of your writing, but this is truly wonderful. Your vision of their life together is perfect, and just feels so real. All of the children, and the grandchildren, and the family who knew, and Hermione's reaction, and the pull they always felt towards each other.....I think my heart broke and re-formed about a dozen times.

I am so glad they got their happy ending. What a beautiful, heartbreaking, amazing story. :)

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[info]shocfix
2008-03-12 07:12 am UTC (link)
awww, you read my baby!

thank you so much, I am very proud of it, yes.

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(Anonymous)
2008-03-22 10:18 am UTC (link)
Even before reading this story, I had long proclaimed that you were the true writer of the Ron/Harry ship. I have, throughout reading your fics, always felt that there was no one that understand Ron or Harry quite like you. And this story proves it. No. This story is more than that. Perfect, and horribly wrong. Never has a story touched me this deeply, made me start to cry in front of the computer, my roommates staring at me like I'm crazy. And I am crazy. This story... I can't even explain it. It's lovely, wonderfully horrible and wonderful. There aren't words in the english dictionary to describe it, so I will use a swedish word instead; obönhörligen. Constant and more.
Loved it.
//ICatherine A. Henly

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(Anonymous)
2008-06-30 12:51 am UTC (link)
Wow! I just read the whole thing all together and it was heartbreaking and beautiful. So wonderfully written and the characters were so true and real. I hated them and loved them so much. One of the best fics I have ever read.

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[info]shocfix
2008-06-30 06:39 am UTC (link)
Aw, thank you, stranger!

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[info]maevemist
2008-08-18 12:00 pm UTC (link)
OMG I am physically shaking from my tears here. Now I know why everyone raves about your writing, this is so beautiful and heart wrenching. I would say more but I can't type.

Thank you.

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[info]shygryf
2008-08-27 08:06 pm UTC (link)
utterly gorgeous and heartbreaking and i have no idea why i never read it long ago.

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[info]shocfix
2008-08-27 08:09 pm UTC (link)
did you just read the whole thing?

oh my goodness!

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[info]shygryf
2008-08-27 08:11 pm UTC (link)
I did. i'm a fast reader.

i am currently pretending i have allergies.

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[info]shocfix
2008-08-27 08:12 pm UTC (link)
*hands you a tissue*

This Ron really does own my soul.

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[info]titic
2008-09-29 11:18 pm UTC (link)
Oh my god, I'm crying and I can't see the screen properly. I was really reluctant to give this a try (I inhale all your other fic, but.. this seemed really angst-heavy, and I was a little scared--I actually backtracked at first when I saw it was based on BBM) but I'm so glad I read through: you captured the feeling of BBM perfectly, as in 'the safe retreat where they could be themselves'. I have a lot of difficulty with infidelity fics (they hit a little close to home) but this was just... there are really no words. I think Ron best describes it, really, when he says to Hermione "With Harry, it's like breathing."

This is truly amazing, and I especially loved how we could feel the passage of time and them getting older (what with the sex being less acrobatic :P) And it's just... Really, I'm floundering. It's real and as much as it is heartwrenching, your style truly portrays a difficult situation very subtly and without unnecessary drama.

I thought this was just so powerful, and while I may not read it again--an emotional rollercoaster is enough once a year, methinks-- I really wanted to tell you how amazing I thought this was.

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[info]shocfix
2008-09-30 01:11 am UTC (link)
oh, thank you so, so much!!!

this fic is my baby, and I could not be happier than when it reduces someone to a gibbering wreck.

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[info]snowe.livejournal.com
2008-11-23 12:38 pm UTC (link)
This was a very interesting reinterpretation of BBM, but the ending seems wrong to me. BBM showed how repression and prejudice can ruin lives, how it forces people to deceive themselves. The main characters in the movie were awful husbands, especially Ledger's character (intimations of sexual cruelty); I felt sorry for them, immensely sorry, but still, they were not good people.

Ron has robbed Hermione of the chance to find someone who would love her the way she loved Ron. The reveal was a huge letdown--I know that the focus of the piece was Harry and Ron, but...well, Hermione had a right to be angry and hurt, and it seemed like all that was shoved under the rug to give the happy Harry/Ron ending. Being gay isn't some free pass to be a deceitful coward.

That's one thing I've noticed in a lot of your Harry/Ron stories--I like the ship, but Hermione is my favorite character and I think she gets shortchanged.

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[info]hpuckle
2008-11-26 08:59 pm UTC (link)
See? Told you I wouldn't be able to stop. This is just bloody amazing. The angst and the heartache and the whole crying-so-much-I-nearly-choke is just brilliant. Amazing. And I totally cannot put into words how much I adored this.

xxx

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[info]shocfix
2008-11-27 01:10 am UTC (link)
and I cannot put into words how much that means to me!

This thing was my baby... I plotted and had spreadsheets with the kids' ages and tormented everyone and posted daily and everyone thought I was gonna kill Harry...

But read it during the day!!

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[info]okydoky
2008-12-21 06:50 pm UTC (link)
Argh, I love this fic so much. Just re-read and it has killed me as much this time as it did the first. Brilliant. ♥

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[info]shocfix
2008-12-21 06:52 pm UTC (link)
Ah, I needed to kill someone, tonight - many thanks!

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[info]emmacmf
2009-05-31 05:57 pm UTC (link)
Oh, shoc! My shoc! You are wonderful and this story was wonderful, and I loved it so much - and everybody got their happy ending, eventually. You did a beautiful job, and I adore your Hermione for being so understanding - which makes sense, because she loves her boys, and wants them to be happy.

I wish I'd been around during the posting of this ... then again, I might not have been able to take the pressure ...

You need to write another epic fic, A.S.A.P!

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[info]emmacmf
2009-05-31 05:59 pm UTC (link)
Oh, and this is your definitive fic, and the first one I will rec to any friends that are H/R newbies.

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[info]emmacmf
2009-05-31 06:01 pm UTC (link)
And look - I finished it with three minutes to spare before midnight! And now I'm off to bed, a happy bunny.

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[info]shocfix
2009-05-31 06:07 pm UTC (link)
you are a star!

sleep well.

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