Oh shit girl! That was so fucking fantastic! double penetration is a bit of a squick of mine (a minor one...) and generally, I find threesomes a bit confusing to read, but this was so hot, and so believable and SO GODDAMNED FUNNY! I think I am your newest, biggest fan!
Shit, that last line just about killed me!
You have wonderful pacing, great dialogue, believable characters and hawt, hawt smutz! The double blowjob was mouth watering!