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shocfix ([info]shocfix) wrote,
@ 2005-05-26 01:00:00

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Piano - H/R - R
Title: Piano
Author: [info]shocolate
Pairing: Harry/Ron
Words: 1000
Rating: R

For [info]daisy_roots - yeah, Harry/Ron, sorry – how many of my flist would read Snarry?


Piano
****
I suppose there could have been a worse moment to fall in love with Harry. I’d have got myself into so much trouble, at school; at almost any point on our Quest would have made things really, really awkward; I could have been standing beside him, as he married my sister.

So, being in a nice, tidy front room, in a Muggle house didn’t sound too dangerous. Admittedly, we were waiting, downstairs, while my girlfriend was upstairs, lifting the Memory Charms on her sleeping parents, and I would be in a fair bit of danger, when I told her.

Because I’d have to tell her.

That I’d been standing in front of the fireplace, looking at photographs of various small Hermiones, hair bushier than ever in the humidity of various foreign locations, thinking no more than how cute she was, when I winced at a discordant plunking sound.

Hermione’s parents have a piano, in their front room, ‘though she says no one plays; she’d had lessons, which she’d hated, because she’d been no good at it, when she was little, and had been allowed to give it up when the keys would mysteriously stick together.

Stubborn, spontaneous magic, of course, my stubborn girl.

So, I turned ‘round, mid wince, to see Harry sitting at the piano, in his smart visiting Muggles jacket, a look of determination on his face, his hands picking out something indescribable at the keyboard.

I had had absolutely no idea that Harry could play the piano.

And I was right.

He frowned with concentration as he ‘played’, and I looked at his hands, as they moved slowly, and they were only Harry’s hands, but I’ve always loved it when Harry really focuses on something, and Harry was so focused on getting them to do something delicate and creative and beautiful and I wanted to kneel beside him and suck on his fingers.

I was so blindsided by the thought – the vivid image in my head – that I couldn’t move. I stood and stared at his hands, and his fingers moved carefully and deliberately, and I couldn’t hear the dreadful music he was making, over the sound of the blood pounding in my ears.

I wanted those hands on me, not some stupid piano, that didn’t know him like I did; I wanted to raise his hand to my lips and stare into his eyes as I slowly took two fingers in my mouth, watching him gasp, hearing him moan as he pressed down on my tongue, knowing that we were both thinking of where else he could slide those fingers.

I’d shared no more than a handful of kisses with Hermione, that we both knew were feeling more and more platonic, and I was worried that I’d never dare go any further, because we’d left it too long, worried that I’d never have another red hot erotic thought to wank to.

I needn’t have worried, because my feet took me across the room, to Harry’s side, and he looked up at me, a delighted smile on his face as his hands hovered over the keys, and I licked my lips, wanting to… devour him.

“My music teacher at primary school taught me this,” he said happily. “I almost completely can’t remember how it goes.”

I knelt down, breathing rapidly.

The voice of reason tried to stop me - a small voice, in the back of my head, that sounded far too much like Hermione, saying ‘that’s why they’re called fantasies, Ron; you’re not supposed to act on them’, but a voice that sounded like Harry said ‘why would a voice in Ron’s head use a semi-colon, Hermione? That’s not the way to get through to him. Maybe I want him to suck my fingers’.

I reached out and took hold of his hand, gazing at his slender fingers, his blunt cut fingernails.

“Was it really that bad?” he asked, thinking I was just pulling it away from the keyboard, not realizing I wanted to keep it. Keep it safe. Safe and sound, inside me. My mouth, my heart.

My arse.

“I’ve been through far more with you than this piano has,” I found myself saying, which, while I’m pretty sure it’s a unique pick-up line, was not obviously a pick-up line.

“But Mary Had a Little Lamb is the final straw?” he said, with a huge grin.

“It… doesn’t deserve you,” I said faintly, pulling his hand up to my lips and slowly and hotly and wetly and yes, Hermione, I know that those are adverbs, sucking them into my mouth, up to the second knuckle.

His free hand crashed onto my rival, with a deep and mangled boom.

His mouth dropped open.

“Ron?” he breathed.

I gazed up at him, bobbing my head and sucking harder and he watched his fingers fuck my mouth and his beautiful eyes were wide, behind his glasses, and his beautiful lips were parted and he launched himself off the piano stool, tackling me to the ground.

For a frozen second I thought he was gonna beat the shit out of me, for thinking he could be queer, even though I hadn’t, I’d just thought I’d follow him, for the rest of my life, waiting for a chance to suck his fingers.

And that maybe I should have just held onto that thought, because I was gonna follow him, for the rest of my life, anyway, and no one would ever know about the finger thing.

But then his hands pinned my wrists to the floor and he was staring down at me and he said my name and his mouth closed on mine and I moaned as I opened up to him.

My mouth opened and I tasted him.

My legs opened and he settled between them, an answering hardness pressed against my aching cock.

My heart opened and fuck, just how girly was it, but he’d always been in there, hadn’t he.

The door opened and Hermione screamed.


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[info]mrsquizzical
2008-07-26 07:14 am UTC (link)
I wanted those hands on me, not some stupid piano, that didn’t know him like I did;

and

“I almost completely can’t remember how it goes.”

i've missed your writing so much! *covets*

For a frozen second I thought he was gonna beat the shit out of me, for thinking he could be queer, even though I hadn’t, I’d just thought I’d follow him, for the rest of my life, waiting for a chance to suck his fingers.

*sob*
see? just like that! yes!

eep! surprise angsty ending!

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[info]shocfix
2008-07-26 02:39 pm UTC (link)
awww - I've missed your missing my writing!

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[info]secretsolitaire
2008-07-26 08:15 am UTC (link)
I’d just thought I’d follow him, for the rest of my life, waiting for a chance to suck his fingers.

Oh, Ron! ♥♥

Enjoyed this, of course.

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[info]shocfix
2008-07-26 02:39 pm UTC (link)
that line has been a hit!

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[info]trubbleclef
2008-07-26 08:48 am UTC (link)
Just beautiful. And poor Hermione!

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[info]shocfix
2008-07-26 02:40 pm UTC (link)
ah, well - I like to think she saw it coming...

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[info]solstice_muse
2008-07-26 09:01 am UTC (link)
Finger lust!

I understand the finger lust!

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[info]shocfix
2008-07-26 02:40 pm UTC (link)
I thought you might...

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[info]yenny2206
2008-07-26 09:24 am UTC (link)
Sexy. But this cant be a one shot.

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[info]shocfix
2008-07-26 02:40 pm UTC (link)
hmmm... I'll see!

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[info]linnet_melody
2008-07-26 09:35 am UTC (link)
Such a poetic way with words your Ron has. Lovely!!

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[info]shocfix
2008-07-26 02:41 pm UTC (link)
his Harry loves him, anyway!

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[info]hpuckle
2008-07-26 09:43 am UTC (link)
Oh my! Poor Hermione, but OMG those boys are so deliciously hot.

“It… doesn’t deserve you,” I said faintly, pulling his hand up to my lips and slowly and hotly and wetly and yes, Hermione, I know that those are adverbs, sucking them into my mouth, up to the second knuckle.

His free hand crashed onto my rival, with a deep and mangled boom.


Guh!

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[info]shocfix
2008-07-26 02:41 pm UTC (link)
He's not gonna lose out to a piano!!

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[info]cupboardwitch
2008-07-26 09:45 am UTC (link)
For a frozen second I thought he was gonna beat the shit out of me, for thinking he could be queer, even though I hadn’t, I’d just thought I’d follow him, for the rest of my life, waiting for a chance to suck his fingers.

That may be the most perfectly, true-to-character, Ron-like things I've ever read.

I loved this story!

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[info]shocfix
2008-07-26 02:41 pm UTC (link)
Oh!

*bursts into tears*

what a lovely thing to say!

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[info]emmacmf.livejournal.com
2008-07-26 09:56 am UTC (link)
*babbles incoherently* Hands! HANDS!!! I have such a thing for hands, I tell ya, and hands playing a piano? omg. *babbles again*

You win at Ron first-person narrative, you really do.

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[info]shocfix
2008-07-26 03:27 pm UTC (link)
Harry's beautiful hands on a piano...

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[info]incantatrix
2008-07-26 07:10 pm UTC (link)
*melts a little, and not just because England finally realised that it's summertime* There's something incredibly sexy about watching a person play the piano.

And, this is emmacmf, um, I kind of forgot that I had an IJ account when I commented the first time. Ooops.

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[info]nakeefeet
2008-07-26 10:53 am UTC (link)
This is lovely!

For a frozen second I thought he was gonna beat the shit out of me, for thinking he could be queer, even though I hadn’t, I’d just thought I’d follow him, for the rest of my life, waiting for a chance to suck his fingers.

How wonderfully Ron. *sigh*

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[info]shocfix
2008-07-26 03:28 pm UTC (link)
thank you!!

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[info]hedwigs_bane
2008-07-26 11:29 am UTC (link)
“It… doesn’t deserve you,” I said faintly, pulling his hand up to my lips and slowly and hotly and wetly and yes, Hermione, I know that those are adverbs, sucking them into my mouth, up to the second knuckle.
And what is wrong with adverbs, I ask you? I think "hotly" and "wetly" are perfectly acceptable in this context. In fact, I'd say they were manditory!

Poor Hermione, but hey, if she's half as bright as she's purported to be, it shouldn't come as a great surprise anyway...

Nice one!

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[info]shocfix
2008-07-26 04:28 pm UTC (link)
thank you!

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(Anonymous)
2008-07-26 11:57 am UTC (link)
This was very hot.

And I'd read Snarry. I love Snarry. I love almost anyone if you write it like that :)

(zentariana from livejournal)

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[info]shocfix
2008-07-26 04:29 pm UTC (link)
ah, I wrote it for a Snarry person...

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[info]la_dissonance
2008-07-26 12:11 pm UTC (link)
Ngggg *babbles* this is so good! Absolutely beautiful! I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. There are probably too many lines that I liked to copy them all down, so I'll just pick one at random:

...photographs of various small Hermiones, hair bushier than ever in the humidity of various foreign locations...

I agree with Ron here! That sounds adorably cute. ^^ Hehe, various small Hermiones...with even bushier hair... *is almost distracted from the burning hotness that is the Ron/Harry*

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[info]shocfix
2008-07-26 04:29 pm UTC (link)
I'd love to see Hermione's hair in the heat¬

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(Anonymous)
2008-07-26 01:04 pm UTC (link)
It… doesn’t deserve you
I love that Ron just blurted it out without context!
I’d just thought I’d follow him, for the rest of my life, waiting for a chance to suck his fingers.
Me too, Ron.
Fabulous!

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[info]shocfix
2008-07-26 04:29 pm UTC (link)
not the smoothest chat up lines!

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[info]daisy_roots
2008-07-26 01:04 pm UTC (link)
Thank you *hugs*

I slowly took two fingers in my mouth, watching him gasp, hearing him moan as he pressed down on my tongue, knowing that we were both thinking of where else he could slide those fingers

*sigh*

Love the ending :-)

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[info]shocfix
2008-07-26 04:31 pm UTC (link)
It's a lovely image... those hands, moving on the keyboard...

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(Anonymous)
2008-07-26 01:32 pm UTC (link)
For a frozen second I thought he was gonna beat the shit out of me, for thinking he could be queer, even though I hadn’t, I’d just thought I’d follow him, for the rest of my life, waiting for a chance to suck his fingers.

This line is utter perfection.

I get so happy when you write Ron and Harry together. :D

~IamShadow

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[info]shocfix
2008-07-26 04:33 pm UTC (link)
That line has gone down well!!

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[info]shygryf
2008-07-26 02:38 pm UTC (link)
that was lovely.


poor Hermione!

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[info]shocfix
2008-07-26 04:34 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!

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(Anonymous)
2008-07-26 04:55 pm UTC (link)
You write them so well.

This is lovely.

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[info]wild_cherrie
2008-07-27 12:38 am UTC (link)
OMG, the last line! *dies*

Thank you for a wonderful read. :-)



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[info]lyras
2008-07-27 01:06 am UTC (link)
This is just so lovely! I mean, yes, there's your usual light witticisms and puncturing of serious stuff and what have you, but it's also just such a lovely description of what it's like to love someone. Gorgeous :).

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[info]shocfix
2008-07-31 07:36 pm UTC (link)
*blushes*

They just love each other so much!!!

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[info]plotbunniofdoom
2008-07-27 08:07 pm UTC (link)
My heart opened and fuck, just how girly was it, but he’d always been in there, hadn’t he.

Great line.

*sigh*

Great fic.

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[info]shocfix
2008-07-31 07:36 pm UTC (link)
He's doomed.

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[info]matroushka
2008-07-28 09:11 pm UTC (link)
Absolutely gorgeous! Your Ron voice was perfection, as always - but the boy really needs to work on his timing, bless him!

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[info]shocfix
2008-07-31 07:36 pm UTC (link)
well, what has that piano done to deserve being caressed like that???

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(Anonymous)
2008-11-23 03:32 am UTC (link)
Brilliant!

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