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shocfix (
shocfix
) wrote,
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2003
-
02
-
21
03:00:00
Ron's Hands - R/Hr - G
Title:
Ron's Hands
Rating:
G
Words:
100
Author's Note (if any):
many thanks to L for the beta
Written for Challenge 3 of the
rwhg_ldws
.
Prompt: Ron's hands
Drabble length: 100 exactly
I, um, kinda won and got a pretty banner… but best of all,
oncelikeshari
didn't spot me, and thought it was by
scribhneoir1
!!
Ron's Hands
****
Folded on your breast, moving gently with each sleeping breath.
Breathe.
For so many years, always so strong, so vital.
Breathe.
First holding a quill, then wielding your wand, then touching me.
Touching me.
Breathe.
So tentatively, at first, so young and so awkward.
My face, my breast.
Your beautiful hands.
Breathe.
Long freckled fingers.
Holding your child's hand.
Teaching them to fly, to soar.
Touching me.
Breathe.
So confident, so comforting, so familiar.
How grumpy you got when age spots outnumbered the freckles.
Holding a grandchild's hand.
Folded on your breast, moving gently with each sleeping breath.
Which stop.
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hpuckle
2009-04-19 08:13 am UTC
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Finally got around to starting to read these!
:( I probably wouldn't have spotted you either.
This was just perfect (that's not to say everything you write isn't spot on lol!)
xxx
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